|
Hey Annie. I like how you use stream of consciousness writing.
I really like your sentences about golf too. What is your characters name and
who are the names mentioned? Great post. From, Alex on Waking Up
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 9/23/13
|
|
Hi Annie, to me your book is filled with tons of amazing
dialogue! It has a lot of non-fiction life meaning it is more than likely to
happen in the real world. Bennett on Brothers and
Sisters
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 9/15/13
|
|
Hey Annie, This dialouge it really amazing! Its very relatable
and I can picture what is happening when Max tackles his sister! Keep it up!
Katie on Brothers and
Sisters
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 9/11/13
|
|
Hi Annie, I really like your dialogue! It has lots of detail
and it could happen in real life. Happy Blogging, Omar on Brothers and
Sisters
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 9/9/13
|
|
Hey Annie, I love movies and that one sounds really good! Im
glad you get to hang out with your family and do fun stuff! Id love to go see
that movie now! Katie on The Butler
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 9/4/13
|
|
Hey Annie! That movie sounds so good! I love going to see
movies too. There are so many good ones out. I think it's really neat that
you go with your family, it sounds like a really good way to bond. <3 Kate
on The Butler
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 9/4/13
|
|
Hi, Annie! My family and I love to go see movies too! Also,
that movie seems really interesting. I liked how you gave the plot of the
movie, because now I am convinced to go and see it. Great job! Chanler on The Butler
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 9/4/13
|
|
Annie this books sounds really good! I hope you are enjoying
it! on Coco Chanel an
Intimate Life
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 8/29/13
|
|
Hi Katherine Ann, Thanks for your advice. I will take it!
-Annie Kramer on Divergent
in response to Hi Annie: I am glad you liked Divergent! I did
too! However, where you put the first comma in the first sentence, there
should be a period. There should also be a comma after "For
example." Good job though, Katherine Ann, by Katherine Ann
Andreeff.
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 8/29/13
|
|
Dear Annie, That sounds super cool!! I liked your description
of how it feels and i'm really jealous! Sounds like a blast! That's cool that
you met someone that had that car! Great post! -Paul on 1965 Mustang
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 8/29/13
|
|
Hey Annie, That sounds super cool, I love riding in
convertibles with the music cranked up and my hair blowing in the wind. It's
kind of strange that a random guy came up to you and started talking about
his life, but it's kinda cool learning about other peoples experiences. I
liked the topic because it was unexpected and unique. Wish you the best with
blogging, Amanda on 1965 Mustang
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 8/28/13
|
|
Hi Annie: I am glad you liked Divergent! I did too! However,
where you put the first comma in the first sentence, there should be a
period. There should also be a comma after "For example." Good job
though, Katherine Ann on Divergent1 replies.
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 8/26/13
|
|
Thanks! I am most excited about meeting new friends and
hanging out with the old ones! Annie on Introduction
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 8/23/13
|
|
Hey Annie, What are you most excited about for high school?
I'm also a huge fan of fashion, and think that it is super sweet and
considerate that you enjoy volunteering and helping out animals. I also
enjoyed that you choose to do an introduction of yourself as your free post.
I wish you the best in working hard and achieving you ideal grade. Sincerely,
Amanda on Introduction
Remove content | Delete | Spam
|
on 8/22/13
|
No comments:
Post a Comment