Reading Response

    In English Class this week we did peer editing and revising.  We each read each other's Literacy Narrative and marked anything they should change or anything they did good.  It was very helpful because you got feedback on your paper and enjoyed reading someone else's.  One of the papers I read wad Omar's.  It was great.  It described about how his mother and him had gone to the library and his father and him had gone to the book store.  He described how the library has that certain glorious spell and how the Liberian read him Cat in The Hat with the blue cover and the cat with the big hat on the cover.  Omar's dad took him to the movies before he went to the book store and the popcorn was his favorite part.  I really enjoyed reading Omar's Literacy Narrative.

    The paper I read that day during peer review brought me back to Omar's childhood.  I felt like I was actually there.  His literacy narrative had great vivid detail, although he lacked sentence fluency which he later fixed.  Omar's Literacy Narrative was great, it was like reading a book.  I suggest that when ever we do a paper that we should do peer editing and revising.  Doing this startagy makes you a better editor and revisor all while having fun.

Annie Kramer
#5 Reading Log
9/15/13
Block 4
Dr. deGravelles

9/9/13 Monday-
Seventeenth Summer- 9 Minutes Pages 125-134 (6)
9/10/13 Tuesday-
Literacy Narrative- 30 Minutes
9/11/13 Wednesday-
Literacy Narrative- 30 Minutes
9/12/13 Thursday-
Seventeenth Summer- 24 Minutes Pages 134-153 (19)
9/13/13 Friday-
Seventeenth Summer- 20 Minutes Pages 153-170 (17)
9/14/13 Saturday-
Seventeenth Summer- 14 Minutes Pages 170-180 (10)
9/15/13 Sunday-
Seventeenth Summer- 15 Minutes Pages 180-192 (12)
Total Minutes 142
Total Pages 64
Paused Coco Chanel An Intimate Life, but still going to finish.